Day 16: Contrast (double cinquain)

Roughened
with sandpaper,
the wall’s imperfections
approach a continuous plane
until
smoothened.
The set surface,
recounting the coarseness
of my finger tracing contours,
breathes in.

*************
I may have broken a cinquain rule by bridging to the second set. It also ends up with a certain erotic quality.

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Day 16: Contrast (double cinquain)

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